Friday, May 15, 2020

Translation: Where the Rubber Meets the Road - I

ᎭᏢ ᎠᏜ ᏗᏠᎯᏍᏓᏎ ᏅᏃᎯᏁ
hatlv adla ditlohisdase nvnohine



I've been in the translation business, on and off, since 1963. Some things have changed enormously, but others are still true, and always will be.

Back then, machine translation was only a dream. The early attempts at it were terrible, a joke, really. I assiduously avoided it, not dipping my feet into those smelly waters, even for very limited purposes, until the late 1990s. The software available then was atrocious, and led to disastrous results, more often than not, unless you knew the source and target languages well enough to properly edit the output of the program. In other words, it was almost useless.

Things began to change about ten years ago. There are still many very poor translation programs, but one or two are quite amazing. The one I consistently use, when I use one at all, is Google Translate. I am not aware of anything else that is as good. One can translate between any pair of languages out of a list of 100 languages. Depending upon the quality of implementation for any specific language, the results can be excellent. Most of the time, I only need to change a few words.

So that is where we stand with regard to the technical side of the process. Naturally, if you need to translate to or from a language that is not on the list, you are out of luck, and must do the whole thing manually. But there is something else to be considered, and it is the part of the process that fascinates me most: every translation is also a cross-cultural process. When the cultures are similar, as is usually the case among the European languages, there may not be much of a problem. When, however, you have widely varying cultures, as is usually the case with indigenous languages, the cross-cultural aspect can be quite challenging.

The Bible is the most-translated book on earth. It has been translated, in whole or in part, into more than a thousand languages. These translations often involve an enormous cultural gulf that must somehow be bridged. I am currently working on a translation of the Gospel of Matthew into Udugi, a constructed language that is based on Cherokee (Tsalagi, ꮳꮃꭹ) vocabulary, but has a much simpler, Esperanto-like grammar. I am basically translating Matthew from the King James Version (KJV) of 1611, frequently consulting the Cherokee New Testament, translated in the 1840s. In addition to a wide cultural gulf to be bridged, there is linguistic change to be reckoned with on both ends of the process.

Cherokee is extraordinarily complex in its verb system, which is one of the reasons why it is now an endangered language. In addition, it has an extremely restrictive phonology (it lacks the p, b, f, and v sounds, which are unpronounceable to a monolingual Cherokee-speaker). Among natural languages, there are only four others that have no bilabials: Wichita (Caddoan family), Aleut (Eskimo-Aleut), and Eyak and Hupa (both Na-Dene). One of these languages, Wichita, does not even have the "m" sound, which Cherokee does have. The others, like Cherokee, do have "m." Interestingly both Cherokee (Southern Iroquoian) and Wichita use the "Qu" (kw) sound to represent the unpronounceable "p" and "b" bilabial stops. Both languages are part of the Keresiouan macro stock within Almosan-Keresiouan, so they are distantly related. Linguistically, if no longer culturally, the Cherokee are "Plains Indians." Udugi, by the way, uses the Cherokee phonology, so has the same limitations as Cherokee.

The restrictive phonology mentioned above explains the name Qualla for the Cherokee reservation in North Carolina: it was named after a woman whose first name was Paula. It also explains why the Biblical name Abraham appears in Cherokee as "Equahami" (pronounced as "Egwahami" in Oklahoma). "Mary appears as "Meli" because the living dialects of Cherokee have "l," but not "r." There is no "sh" sound, so I have to follow previous practice and represent the name "Jesus" as "Tsisa." "Joseph" (also per previous practice) is "Tsowa," and "Herod" is "Elodv." "v" is a vowel that sounds like the "u" in the English word "but."

(to be continued)






Text and image © 2020 by Donald C. Traxler aka Donald Jacobson Traxler, ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

Thursday, May 14, 2020

Matthew Chapter 2, Verses 9-12 in Udugi

9  hilayvi nasgidv advgise ugvwiyuhine, nasgidv ahnagisdiyise; ale gvniyuquo, noquisi, na hagatise kalvgvi hawina, anagisdise nasgidv igvyiditlv, igohida nasgi nvlise ale gadogise hanani galvladitlv hatlv gesvise ayoli ayotli.

10 hilayvi nasgidv agowadodise noquisine, alihelisdise galosvstanvhi.

11 hilayvino nasgidv nvlise adanelv nahnai, nasgidv hagatise ayoli etsi meli gvdodi, ale eladi ulosvgise ale adadolisdodise nasgine: ale hilayvi nasgidv asduidise unatseli tsugvwalodine, nasgidv udanedise adanedodine nasgi didla; adelv-dalonige, ale uganasdv-gawasvgi-adla, ale mila.

12  ale gesvanete uyotsvhita unelanvhi gvdodi asgitisdi hawina na nasgidv ase tla hulutsi elodv didla, nasgidv ahnagisdiyise nasgidvsa elohi nudale nvnohi gvdodi.






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Wednesday, May 13, 2020

When they saw the star, they rejoiced Mt 2:10 (Cherokee, Udugi, en, fr, es, pt)

Matthew 2:10

Cherokee (ꮳꮃꭹ): unigohvno nasgi noquisi, utsatanvhi unalihelitsei. / ᎤᏂᎪᎲᏃ ᎾᏍᎩ ᏃᏈᏏ, ᎤᏣᏔᏅᎯ ᎤᎾᎵᎮᎵᏤᎢ.

Udugi (ꭴꮪꭹ): hilayvi nasgidv agowadodise noquisine, alihelisdise galosvstanvhi. / ᎯᎳᏴᎢ ᎾᏍᎩᏛ ᎠᎪᏩᏙᏗᏎ ᏃᏈᏏᏁ, ᎠᎵᎮᎵᏍᏗᏎ ᎦᎶᏒᏍᏔᏅᎯ.

English (KJV): When they saw the star, they rejoiced with exceeding great joy.

English (modern): When they saw the star, they rejoiced exceedingly.


Quand ils ont vu l'étoile, ils se sont beaucoup réjouis.

Cuando vieron la estrella, se regocijaron en extremo.

Quando eles viram a estrela, eles se alegraram muito.






Text and image © 2020 by Donald C. Traxler aka Donald Jacobson Traxler, ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

Matthew Chapter 2, Verses 5-8 in Udugi

5  ale nasgidv hinegise nasgi didla, gaduyi hawina tsudiyi vhnai: igvnisisgi hia-iyv gesvase gowelodita adelohosgi gvdodi,

6  "ale nihi, gaduyi, elohi tsudiyi hawina, tla gesvase usdigesdodi ugvwiyuhi-uwetsi ayeli tsudiyi vhnai: igvnisisgi nihi-nidvlenvda nvlose ugvwiyuhi na asdawadvsdose aqua yvwine isili."

7  nahiyvi elodv, ulosonv atsvyai utselide uyanise agatahnai asgayadi, adadvdodise nasgidvne  alinigvnehie hilayvi noquisi gananugoisdise.

8  ale atsvyai adanvsdise nasgidvne gaduyi didla, ale hinegise, hena ale ayasdu alinigvnehie ayoli ayotline; ale hilayvi nihi awadvdise nasgine, asiquo ayohisdu kaneisdine ayv didla, yadvhna na ayv yeliquose nvli ale adadohisdodi nasgine nasquv.





 
Text and image © 2020 by Donald C. Traxler aka Donald Jacobson Traxler, ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

Tuesday, May 12, 2020

utiyvhi / Balance (Udugi, en, fr, es, pt)

gesvase utiyvhi
adanvtediyi ale nulinigvgv ayeli,
galvladihi
ale elohihi ayeli,
ulasigi
ale ulvsada ayeli.
itsula yeliquo nigohilvi asquanigododi
na utiyvhine.

ᎨᏒᎠᏎ ᎤᏘᏴᎯ
ᎠᏓᏅᏖᏗᏱ ᎠᎴ ᏄᎵᏂᎬᎬ ᎠᏰᎵ,
ᎦᎸᎳᏗᎯ
ᎠᎴ ᎡᎶᎯᎯ ᎠᏰᎵ,
ᎤᎳᏏᎩ
ᎠᎴ ᎤᎸᏌᏓ ᎠᏰᎵ.
ᎢᏧᎳ ᏰᎵᏉ ᏂᎪᎯᎸᎢ ᎠᏍᏆᏂᎪᏙᏗ
Ꮎ ᎤᏘᏴᎯᏁ.

There is a balance
between mental and physical,
between heavenly
and earthly,
between dark
and light.
May we always keep
that balance.

Il y a un équilibre
entre mental et physique,
entre céleste
et terrestre,
entre l'obscurité
et la lumière.
Puissions-nous toujours garder
cet équilibre.

Hay un equilibrio
entre mental y físico,
entre celestial
y terrestre,
entre oscuridad
y luz.
Que siempre podamos mantener
ese equilibrio.

Existe um equilíbrio
entre mental e físico,
entre celeste
e terreno,
entre escuro
e luz.
Que possamos sempre manter
esse equilíbrio.






Text and image © 2020 by Donald C. Traxler aka Donald Jacobson Traxler, ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

Matthew Chapter 2, Verses 1-4 in Udugi

1  noquu hilayvi tsisa udenv gaduyi tsudiyi hawina, igadi elodv ugvwiyuhi vhnai, gvniyuquo, agatahnai asgayadi nvlise kalvgvi nidvlenvda tsilusilimi didla,

2  hineganete, hatlv gesvase nasgi na udenv ugvwiyuhi anitsusi? igvnisisgi itsula gowatise utseli noquisine kalvgv hawina, ale itsula nvlise adadolisdodi nasgine.

3  hilayvi elodv ugvwiyuhi advgise nasgi-hia iyusdidine, atsvyai gesvise adadeyadodita, ale nigadv tsilusilimi nasgi gvdodi.

4 ale ulosonv atsvyai gatlisodise itsula nigadv ugvniyuhi-adonisgidine ale dinowelisgidine yvwi vhnai, atsvyai adadvdodise nasgidv didla hatlv gesvuse udenv galonedv vhnai.






Text and image © 2020 by Donald C. Traxler aka Donald Jacobson Traxler, ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

Monday, May 11, 2020

For We Have Seen His Star in the East (Cherokee, Udugi, en, fr, es, pt)

Tsalagi (ꮳꮃꭹ): ogigohvyeno utseli noquisi dikalvgv iditlv / ᎣᎩᎪᎲᏰᏃ ᎤᏤᎵ ᏃᏈᏏ ᏗᎧᎸᎬ ᎢᏗᏢ

Udugi (ꭴꮪꭹ): igvnisisgi itsula gowatise utseli noquisine kalvgv hawina / ᎢᎬᏂᏏᏍᎩ ᎢᏧᎳ ᎪᏩᏘᏎ ᎤᏤᎵ ᏃᏈᏏᏁ ᎧᎸᎬ ᎭᏫᎾ

for we have seen his star in the east

car nous avons vu son étoile à l'est

porque hemos visto su estrella en el este

pois vimos sua estrela no leste

--Mt. 2:2






Text and image © 2020 by Donald C. Traxler aka Donald Jacobson Traxler, ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.