Saturday, May 11, 2019

More on Mistranslations of the Bible.

In the course of moving from one continent to another, I had to let go a lot of very good books. One of those that I could not carry was my JPS Tanakh (Hebrew Bible), but it was the compact edition, and the type was too small for these old eyes. Yesterday, in a thrift store, I found one that I like better, and can more easily read. It is the Jerusalem Bible published by Koren Publishers in 1962. [Not to be confused with the better known Jerusalem Bible published in 1966 by Darton, Longman and Todd, which was a Catholic translation, an outgrowth of La bible de Jérusalem (1956).] In that same thrift store I also found a very handsome KJV, and a nice NIV, among other things.

Last night, before going to bed, I opened the KJV at random, to 1 Samuel, and was reading the story of King Saul's pursuit of David with intent to kill him. It's a really good story, told by a storyteller who thoroughly knew his craft. I was soon hooked. Then I came to this, 1 Samuel 20.41, speaking of David and Jonathan: ". . . David arose out of a place toward the south, and fell on his face to the ground, and bowed himself three times; and they kissed one another, and wept one with another, until David exceeded."

What did this mean? "To exceed" is a transitive verb. He exceeded what? The passage could easily be sexual. Did David "come?" I looked the passage up in my wonderful, newly-acquired Hebrew Bible. The English is the same, obviously borrowed from the KJV, but the original Hebrew says:

  עַד־דָּוִד הְִגְדִיל

  "ad-dovid higdiyl." This means "until David became great (or large). To put it in crude terms, while kissing Jonathan, David got a "boner."

Not totally trusting myself, I reviewed the relevant Biblical Hebrew grammar: the form is the Hiph'il of the stative verb גָדַל, and it means "he became great (or large, or big)." In modern English, "he got big."

The implications of this are obvious. David, who was responsible for much of what was beautiful in the Jewish culture of his time, including most of the Psalms, was either gay or bi. Based on the Hebrew words, I don't see any way around it. Nor do I have any problem with it, but there are those who do.

The world of David's time was less fastidious about such things than we tend to be. Homosexuality was a commonplace in that world, and widely accepted. I couldn't let the matter lie, so I picked up the NIV, and read ". . . but David wept more." This is clearly a mistranslation, since the Hebrew words do not mention weeping.

This morning I dug my Vulgata out of the suitcase and read: ". . . et osculantes alterutrum fleverunt pariter David autem amplius" (. . . and kissing each other, they wept equally, but David more.) What kind of sense does this make, "equally. . . but more?" It is well known that the translators of the KJV tried to be faithful to the Hebrew, and were also influenced by the Vulgate. Jerome, the translator of the Vulgate claimed to base his work on the Hebrew, but actually relied more upon the first Jewish translation into Greek, the Septuagint. It is clear that they were all dancing around the original Hebrew words, which were a bit too much for them.

[to be continued]






Text © 2019 by Donald C. Traxler.

In the Eyes of the False / ᎠᎦᏙᎵᏗ ᎭᏫᎾ ᎦᎶᏄᎮᏛ ᎥᎿᎢ

In the eyes of the false, a lover of truth is dangerous, but a lover of truth and beauty is considered an eccentric artist.

ᎠᎦᏙᎵᏗ ᎭᏫᎾ ᎦᎶᏄᎮᏛ ᎥᎿᎢ, ᎤᏓᎨᏳᎯ ᏚᏳᎪᏛ ᎥᎿᎢ ᎨᏒᎠᏎ ᎦᏂᏰᎬ, ᎠᏎᏃ ᎤᏓᎨᏳᎯ ᏚᏳᎪᏛ ᎠᎴ ᎤᏬᏚ ᎨᏒᎠᏎ ᎠᎦᏎᏍᏙᏗᏔ ᎦᎸᏙᎳᎨᏍᏗ ᎤᎸᏃᏘᏍᎩ ᏗᏟᎶᏍᏔᏅᏍᎩ.






Text and image © 2019 by Donald C. Traxler ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

Friday, May 10, 2019

Udugi Translation of a Meme

I saw this on Diaspora (posted by Morgonas and re-shared by Tony Langmach):

"All the power you will ever need is already within you."

I happen to agree with this statement. Here's how it would go in Udugi:

ᏂᎦᏛ ᎤᎳᏂᎬᎬ Ꮎ ᏂᎯ ᎢᏳᏊ ᎤᏚᎳᏙᏎ ᎨᏒᎠᏎ ᎦᏳᎳ ᏂᎯ ᎭᏫᏂᏗᏢ.






Image © 2019 by Donald C. Traxler ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

Thursday, May 9, 2019

The Visits

The visits to this poetry blog come from many countries. The graphic below, which is for the past seven days, is indicative:









Perhaps I should be writing this in Spanish, since the statistics are in Spanish, the language of my computer. Anyway, what you see here is pretty typical, and a picture is, as they say, worth a thousand words. I do get visits from Asia, Africa, and Latin America, but there is a decided bias toward first- and second-world countries.

An interesting thing, which I was able to see in this graphic for the first time, is that "Región Desconocida" ("Unknown Region") appears to be the contested, southern part of the Ukraine, currently occupied by Russia. I had thought that it was Russia proper, perhaps the Russian troll farm. Google has apparently not wished to take what could be interpreted as a political position on this issue, and I have no desire to do so either.

I have no doubt that various governments follow my writings, perhaps because they think that I will use the Udugi language, which is untranslatable by current translation programs, for political purposes. I will not.

I am a poet and photographer, a humanist, a feminist, and a spiritual person, and that's all that I am. I don't give a damn about Shakespeare's ". . . stage, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing." They can have it, I don't want it.

I think that, at one time, the most popular feature of the blog was its nudist/naturist slant. That is still close to my heart, but the most popular feature now is unquestionably the Udugi language. This is a surprise to me, but I am happy about it, and believe that it will be my most enduring legacy.

I thank you all for your continuing interest and enthusiasm. Wadó. ꮹꮩ.






Text and image © 2019 by Donald C. Traxler ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

The Universal Human Condition

Nothing has changed
for a thousand years,
though we now have running water
and electrons will soon replace gears.

The well-to-do do well--
the rest can go to hell.

Our world has shrunk to fit our phone,
while the spirit is left
to dance alone.






Text and image © 2019 by Donald C. Traxler.

To See / ᎪᏩᏘ

To see well,
one must see deeply.

ᎪᏩᏘ ᎣᏍᏛ,
ᎠᏎ ᎪᏩᏘ ᎭᏫᏂᎮ.






Text and image © 2019 by Donald C. Traxler ꮨᏺꭽꮅ.

Wednesday, May 8, 2019

The FaceBowdler

The FaceBowdler
knows no shame,
the FaceBowdler
plays a dirty game.
Hypocrite is
its other name.
This 'crite does faithfully
play its part
to banish freedom
and dumb down art.
Would-be Bowdlers
are silly ducks,
but this effin' monster
really Zucks.

--Pog Mohoin






Text and image © 2019 by Donald C. Traxler.